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Laria Anter 3 years ago

Nice story. I really like the idea. I think you just need maybe to put more characters to flesh the world out a bit. Then its easier for the reader to get invested. But thestory is great.

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TRULYND_H 4 years ago

I feel the same with the previous comment. You're art is wonderful but some pages stuck out cause the next page would be beautifully toned but the next one would be white with weaker line art. And the story jump way too fast after the first few pages. Overall I'd like to see more maybe as a reboot.

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NataliaBatista 4 years ago

Nice work! Your style is so unique, I like it a lot. I just would have wanted the paneling on the pages to be a bit more organized (look in mangas, reference) and maybe that you wouldn't have rushed the story sometimes. It got better more into the story, but the beginning was a bit too quickly told.

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Release Date: 4 years ago

Number of Pages: 54

Language: English

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