I like the art, keep it going! Looking forward for more chapters! Also liked the innovative way of using dialogues between panels, kind of feels more dynamic.

Thanks a lot for your comment!

Thank you! I re-designed the jaguar stains like three times until I was satisfied

Nice plot, I went back to read the first episode before this one. I liked better some of the panels arrangement from the first pages of the first episode but overall nice work! Looking forward for the next chapter!

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll check your work!

Thanks for your comment! I left a comment in your latest chapter, nice work!

I started reading from chapter 1, nice story! Has a great potential. In this last chapter I just felt like there were some panels missing for when Odon arrived with the group. Keep it up! Looking forward for next chapters.

Muy buena historia! Felicidades y éxito!