the art style is beautiful
Keep the good work!

The character designs are awsome
Keep the good work!

Last panel is just amazing, and the small story is great you nailed the expressions!
Its a bit rare seeing a silent manga here but sometimes they are gems!
Keep the good work!

The design of the main character is so cool! :D
Also there is a missing page! I believe its page 11

This story is interesting, you also did an amazing work on paneling, composition ,speed lines, beatiful backgrounds and the rendering is perfect!
This purple linework is also really smooth!
Keep the good work!

Beatiful artstyle! The background are top notch! so detailed!
Keep the good work!

Great Masterpiece! Everything on this OS (One-Shot) is perfect in my opinion, you did an amazing work with the cinematography and action scenes, with the speelines following the movement of the character! Paneling and linework are also good!
The expressions are goofy and funny I liked that! :D
I hope to see more work from you in the future
Keep the good work!

Amazing work! You nailed everything right Art, paneling, composition, expressions, page flow, movement, sound sfx, just perfect!
I consider this a professional level for comics tbh
Keep the good work!

Dam this is good!, I like your artstyle, it fits really well in the story you also did a great job in the paneling, speedlines, composition, the amount of screentone and really good cinematography its just 11/10
I hope to see more works from you in the future you have talent!
Keep the good work!

The art and colors are beatiful, didn´t expect that ending tho... it melted my heart there
This is a masterpiece keep the good work!