what a good conclusion to the story :) the fight was very intense and well paced.

This was a really fun read, and I'm impressed that you drew all that with just a finger! The pacing is good, and the fights are well done. Great job Dez ^_^

Thank you Dez that means a lot ^_^. I'll leave a comment on your manga and let you know my thoughts :) .

Thank you so much my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^_^

this was a fun read and i look forward to reading the next chapter!

Thanks Defiant! Yes, this Guardian thief and those he works WITH are the main antagonists for Fahiri Chronicles :)

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this first chapter! ^_^ Thank you for supporting me for so long.

thank you so much!

Good begining and cliff hanger ! The story is easy to follow and I like the dynamic between the siblings. The Uncle is a hateble villain that's realistic since there are people like that in the world. The only critique I have is several spot of repetative and slightly unnatural dialogue, but other than that great job! Can't wait to read ch.2 and more in the future ^_^

Thank you! I will definitely give your work a read and let you know my thoughts ^_^