Very nice art! Well done! I love how you can tell what’s happening even without dialogue!

Amazing you really deserve to win and get serialization and an anime and everything you want because this story and art are actually incredible. Professionally well made and well written. Good luck I am rooting for you!

The art is very good! But I was confused as to the plot of the story a bit. I got especially confused when his hair colour changed colour though was that a flashback?

It’s a little disrespectful to post a link on another creators work. There are discords and forums and other places for self promotion you should try instead! Good luck with your story though!

I think the artwork is really good! You’re very good at drawing movement and keeping definition between characters and background. The plot is also really unique! It isn’t really the kind of story I enjoy but I’m sure others would really like it. I think you probably could’ve left out him going to the lady and being turned away only to be let into the real party anyway since it didn’t serve the plot much. But otherwise great job!