for ilovesans (Read description)
6年前
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Hello! I just wanted to give you some tips on your art. Your oc has some interesting color choices. They look nice together but there a bit eye bleeding. So instead of using a hard read or blue, lighten or darken the colors a bit. Also, I don't suggest using lines for the hair. Make it a bit more solid and add a few streaks of you want. The wing factor is pretty cool to btw. I would just add some detail into them. ( I didn't draw any detail in them cause I didn't know what to do ). Aand, with the whole 'sans girlfriend's thing, it's fine but you probably won't get hate if you create your own oc like sans and ship it with your oc.
Anyway, that's all my suggestions. 😸