Are these good vocals?

Fly into the sun vocals
This feeling
It cant be helped
Its a feeling of terror..anger and.....relief
Of pain
(Music/intro music)
Ugh why does this world hate me
The children tug
And pull at my hair
The scissors look useful
The pain would be erotic
But the problem is im not ready for it yet
And the world that will be mine will be apart of a new galaxys growth
Thats the problem i just want to die
I need to have the relief of flying into the sun
Maybe i am the planet
This world
Maybe its me
Maybe im the one who needs to be thrown
Into the sun
No
That cant be it
The knife looks delicious
Maybe if i eat it ill feel it stabbing my insides
No
No
No
Thats the problem with this world
I need to keep it going
But i hate it
I hate them
I hate this
This world
Maybe hades can help me
Save me
Please
Help
Save the gods from corruption
The corruption
Of ME