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Continued that story nobody read
So uh I added more to the story with Seagull and Beetle cause I was bored. Please somebody give this criticism or actually read it.
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A caramel dragon sat on her haunches, staring down at the ocean. Home seemed so close, yet far away at the same time. She looked down at her iridescent wings. Three lay perfectly on her back while the far right wing was twisted and crippled and wrapped up in gauze. She'd never be able to leave in this state.
She sighed, her gaze shifting back to the horizon. She felt as though she could see a sliver of land that belonged to her home. The dragon squinted her eyes trying to see if it really was there, but all she could see was the ocean glistening in the moonlight.
'Will I ever get back? Or am I just gonna be stuck with that weird two winged dragon for the rest of my life' she thought with a growl, 'he's way to obnoxious to be "taking care" of me!'
And just as if he read her mind, the light grey dragon walked out of the underbrush with apologetic eyes.
"You'll get back home. Trust me. It'll just take a while for yo-"
"You always say that Seagull! You always do and am I there? NO! I HAVE BEEN HERE FOR WEEKS!!!" She roared.
"Its only been five suns," Seagull said trying to calm her.
"MY TRIBE NEEDS ME!" She growled, feeling tears starting to pile up in her eyes, "My nephew, needs me," she corrected herself.
"Beetle I-"
"If I'm not there who does he have?" Beetle growled, "How am I supposed to keep him safe, when he's there and I'm HERE!"
"Beetle will you ju-"
"YOU'VE PROMISED ME FOR FIVE SUNS THAT YOU'D GET ME HOME!!! HE CAN'T SURVIVE WITH A WAR LIKE THAT RAGING ON!!!"
"Beetle ple-"
"FOR ALL I KNOW HE COULD BE D-"
"BEETLE JUST STOP RAMBLING!" Seagull pleaded. The angry look on Beetle's face faded into sorrow. Wet streams were left on her face where tears poured that she failed to hold back. Her gaze shifted from Seagull to her talons, wishing she could just go home.
"He isn't dead. He may be young, but Soldier is strong. Especially being raised by someone like you," Seagull reassured , brushing his wing against hers causing her to flinch, "You'll get back home. It may take a while but...."
"But what? Is there even anything to say but about?" Beetle asked.
"But you'll see him again. I promise."
"You always say that Seagull! And has it come true yet? No!"
"Just be patient."
"'just be patient' 'it will take a while' patience smatience! I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR PATIENCE!!!" Beetle snarled.
"You'll get there."
"But what if my wings dont heal? What if he's already dead? WHAT IF-"
"THREE MOONS!!! THE ONE TIME I TRY TO SOUND MATURE YOU RUIN THE MOMENT WITH YOUR RAMBLING!!!" Seagull groaned with an irritated tone, "Ill fly you there myself if I have to!"
"And how exactly are you gonna do that?"
"Ill carry you or you can ride on my back."
"No. Just- no," Beetle revolted at the thought. 'On the second talon, I could go there now. But on the third talon...' She looked back at the odd dragon. 'He certainly doesn't look all powerful and mighty as the legend says. How could a dragon like Clearsight come from a land with dragons like this? what did he say he was? A waterwing? An oceanwing? A fishwing?' She scoffed. 'Buuuuuut on the fourth talon he d- No beetle this is only about your Nephew. Why Rove trusted me with her son when I was only 9 is unknown.'
Her thoughts were interrupted when a warm talon rested on her shoulders. She turned around to see Seagull and scowled causing him to quickly remove his talon.
"Don't touch me fishwing," she growled before looking up at the sky.
'How can I be strong when even this fishwing says I ramble? How am I supposed to look after a dragonet when I do everything wrong? How am I even supposed to do anything, when I can't be tough like a true Hivewing?'
"I'm not a fishwing... I'm a seawing..." Seagull said softly.
"I don't care what you are." She said, "All that matters is that you are being completely useless."
Seagull looked down at his talons with a dull look on his face.
"I'm uh... Gonna go to sleep. Y-you keep sulking on this cliff since you seem to do nothing else," he said folornly .
Seagull disappeared into the underbrush leaving Beetle alone.

- POV switch -
Seagull prodded through the forest back to the den where he and Beetle lived- well where he lived at least. He looked back in the direction where Beetle was before dipping his head and reluctantly walked inside.
It was nice having someone else around. Even if they don't appreciate a single thing you do for them and constantly ramble on about their problems not giving a moon if you have any. Even they are constantly impatient. Even if they don't care that you rescued them from the sea and fixed their broken wing. 'Maybe it would be different if I'd stop acting like an immature goof ' he thought.
Seagull sighed at his rambling thoughts. Part of him wanted to just dump her back on the beach where he found her. But the other part ... Had different feelings on the matter.
The Seawing quickly pushed those thoughts aside and curled up on a bed of seaweed that he gathered up this morning. Seagull closed his eyes and dozed off.
'Fishwing that's new' a dark voice echoed, causing Seagull to wake, 'You should have just gotten rid of her. She doesn't give a moon about you!'
"You again? Will you just go away?" Seagull mumbled.
'Hahaha oh Seagull. Poor little Seagull. I thought you wanted other dragons around you. You certainly have no problem keeping Beetle around'
"Yeah cause I know who she is and I can see her?! I have no idea who in Pyrhia you could be!"
'You'll find out soon enough. Just come find me,' the voice chuckled.
Seagull growled at the mysterious dragon before trying to go back to sleep.
'You're not going to sleep on me are you? I mean I'm the only one who cares about you. No one cares about a silly hybrid names after a useless seabird.'
"Just shut up," Seagull scolded.
'Let alone one who's in l-'
"I SAID SHUT UP!"
'Then come find me. You know where I am. I just need to be released and I will aid you.'
"I don't WANT to release you!"
'But Seagull we could be unstoppable! I can give you whatever you most desire!'
"No you can't! That kind of power will just give her a false personality!"
'Ah I see. You're just scared like a scavenger!'
"I'm not-"
"Who are you talking to?" Beetles voice boomed out of no where.
"No one!" Seagulls quickly said.
"Well I heard something," Beetle said, rolling her eyes as she sauntered into the den.
"I uh... Must've been talking in my sleep," Seagull stammered , 'she must think I'm crazy now...'
"Whatever. Just stay out of my way fishwing or I'll get cross," Beetle threatened.
"Seems as though you're already cross" Seagull mumbled loud enough for her to hear.
"Ugh" she sighed before curling up on the ground on the opposite side of the room.
"Goodnight Beetle," Seagull whispered before finally dozing off.

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