Roast me. Do not hold back. Turn me into a pit of lava where I can burn bad art-

Please give me criticism for this art! Feel free to also point out errors in other stuff i've drawn. I've slept on this drawing, and I still hate it but can't identify why. It's been sort of my default lately. It is also a request, so I'm not going to accept this. I have been in a bit of an art block so im ready to get rOastEd out of it.

Oh also i'm gonna be gone for a bit right after this so 1. Take ya time it's OK, 2. If i don't respond soon it's not that you hurt my ego-
Thank you!