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Kaylah's Happy Days

  • Just dropping by to say that this is a nice alternate cover piece! The colors are good, and the chibis are cute!

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Kaylah's Happy Days

  • > Abyssal Yoma Thank you! I consider that the absolute highest praise I could have hoped for, since digging into their characters, understanding them and letting the story develop from their interactions was my goal!! I definitely will keep working on understanding them- it's my weak spot! I'm really grateful for the feedback, seriously, you really took time and thought about it. I'm so happy with your comments and I will keep improving for my next one!!!

  • I think you did a good job with balancing Kaylah's personality, and by that I mean, she's having those feeling of wanting to withdraw from everyone, but yet she's not an exaggerated mess of it. Like, she's still able to have normal talks with Shinji, but once a line is crossed, she switches to that mode in a way that makes sense. Really, the interactions with her and Shinji are pretty nice to read, and Shinji himself makes mistakes and acts selfishly, he's not just perfect and likeable all the time. But yeah, given that the focus was mainly on those two, their writing turned out well. The only "advice" to give would just to be keep your understanding of these characters, because I know how tough it is to write for chars that you can't get inside the head of as the author. Other than that, write what you want, and have fun with it. I'm not much of an authority, but I at least don't see any issues here. It'll be exciting to see what comes next!

  • > masumi the idiot THANK YOU YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON YOU IM GLAD YOU READ IT THA K YOU

  • This is absolutely amazing! I love every part of this! the art is amazing, it turned out better than i thought it would, LOL! the story is amazing and had me glued to my screen, frantically scrolling, just caught up in the intensity of it all! Amazing!!!!!! im so stinking proud of you!!!!!!!!

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